I always liked this story. It's simple, it's character-driven (without that phrase meaning "soppy and plotless"), and it offers a quiet study of two characters no one else had even *touched* in Gargs fanfic at that time. It doesn't rely on an improbable plotline to set up an angsty situation just to torture the characters. It doesn't revolve around an OC, or need one to make the story move. Compared to most of the first stories out there, this one totally rocks. Don't be ashamed of it. Yes, you've learned more since you wrote it, and your style has improved, but you were already good.
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Date: 2003-05-04 07:00 am (UTC)